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Fic: The Haunting of Shearwater's Return (Snupin) 1/2

June 17th, 2012 (01:41 pm)

Title: The Haunting of Shearwaters Return 1/2
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: RL/SS (pre-slash)
Word Count: 6768 this half (13,367 total)
Characters: Remus Lupin, Severus Snape, Percy Weasley, a right wrong'un and a host of suspicious villagers
Warnings: horror, death, suicide themes
Summary: Remus Lupin is sent to investigate a haunting in the muggle village. It all seems to be turning into a Hammer horror film.
Notes: I went to see The Woman in Black and this happened.
Beta'd by the ever diligent and delightful drachenmina.

Lower Perdham sits, outwardly a charming rural idyll, on the east coast of England. Quite what it is lower than is anybody’s guess but it is posited that, like so much of the land area, Upper Perdham long ago fell into the sea, crumbling with the steadily eroding cliffs. The sea has certainly played the main role in the shaping of the village. Harsh waves long ago carved out the cove around which the settlement sits and thick sea mists still descend to stifle the village in choking whiteness. To modern muggles, living in their global village, this place would seem backward and cut off. This is an old village, full of families who can trace their line generation by generation and full of old superstition.

It was to this sheltered hamlet that Remus Lupin came, feeling a little like he had stepped back in time, Ministry briefing in hand. It was Autumn, a few years after the end of the war. Lupin, miraculous survivor and single father, worked for the Department for the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures. He had come to Lower Perdham on behalf of the Spirit Division to investigate reports of a haunting. The Ministry had grown concerned at the tale sent to them –hauntings might be common in the Wizarding world at least, but there were few even there where people were actually killed by the spectre.

The train, a one-carriage affair that should probably have been retired years ago, dawdled into the tiny station, not even the end of the line but merely a bend in the track. Lupin was the only passenger alighting and no one came to collect his ticket. He walked through the station building, finally spotting the stationmaster sprawled in a chair at the back of the ticket office. The rather rotund man’s mouth was open and quiet snores snuffled from it.

‘Excuse me?’ Lupin knocked on the window to the office. The stationmaster turned a little in his chair but remained otherwise somnolent. Lupin glanced out of the door. The station was not close to the village and he could see mist creeping in. Gritting his teeth, he rapped harder on the glass. ‘Excuse me,’ he called once more.

There was a grunt, followed by a snort and then the slow rising of the stationmaster’s head. He stared balefully at Lupin, who smiled back awkwardly.

‘Um, are there any taxis here?’

The stationmaster lifted a hand and jabbed a flabby finger to his right. Lupin looked. An elderly payphone clung to the wall on his left. A hand-written note was pinned over it, rust gathering round the pin, reading ‘Carne Taxi’ followed by a number.

‘Thank you,’ Lupin called but the stationmaster had already gone back to sleep.

The taxi took ten minutes to arrive, during which time Lupin sat on a bench at the front of the station, his well-used leather case beside him. He heard the taxi before he saw it, the ti-ti-ti of an old engine beyond its best, before a battered Vauxhall Cavalier in a unique shade of brown rolled up the road and turned in. If he hadn’t known this was a purely muggle settlement Lupin might have thought magic had been keeping it on the road but as it was he assumed it was either good care or sheer bloody-mindedness. A painted sign reading ‘TAXI’ was tied haphazardly to the roof. Lupin forced himself to smile as the door opened.

‘You’ll want to sit in the front,’ the driver said. ‘Been carryin’ crates in the back.’

There was a distinctly fishy aroma as Lupin got into the car, having placed his case in the boot between some grubby sacks and a pair of very muddy boots.

‘Name’s Carne,’ said the driver as he coaxed the engine back to reluctant life. ‘Where can I take you?’

‘Remus Lupin,’ Lupin introduced himself in return. ‘I’m heading for Shearwater’s Return House.’

Carne’s fingers tightened significantly on the steering wheel. His nostrils flared as he took in a sharp breath. ‘You don’t want to be going up there,’ he said slowly. ‘Bad things happen.’

‘Well, I understand that it’s haunted,’ Lupin said, smiling cheerfully, ‘but that’s why I’m here.’

‘Ghost-hunting, is it?’ Carne scowled, Lupin’s smile clearly having had no effect on him. ‘You’d better take care not to see her, if you know what’s good for any of us.’

‘Whyever not?’

‘’Cause she don’t like to be seen. When she’s seen she … takes one of the children.’

They were passing some houses, small for the most part and old. Lupin hadn’t yet seen another car on the road, only an old woman on a battered bicycle who stared curiously at him as they went by. She had a carrier bag swinging from one handlebar, which she balanced the weight of by leaning almost fully over the other side.

‘Takes them how?’ he asked.

‘Kills ’em.’ Carne’s jaw was set. ‘Or rather … well, John Taylor’s boy up and stepped out of his bedroom window on the first floor and smashed his head open. Spalding’s daughter tied a brick around her neck with her skipping rope and drowned herself in the pond. My brother’s lad … he jumped in front of the combine when old Giles was doing his field.’

‘I’m sorry,’ Lupin offered, feeling a little useless. He thought of Teddy’s bright smile and couldn’t imagine the desperation he would feel if something like that happened to him.

‘She calls ’em, mister, calls ’em to the grave to join her.’

Lupin felt a shiver run along his neck. Carne sounded entirely sincere in what he was saying.

‘She lost her own lad, they say,’ Carne continued, ‘not sure how, though. Some have it he tumbled from the cliff, others that he was poisoned, even that he drowned in his own bath. Anyhow, she couldn’t live without him and killed herself. Only she can’t find him, see, so she’s been taking the village kids instead.’

Lupin watched the village go by outside the car window. It seemed quiet and peaceful: children played on bikes without supervision while ducks bobbed on the pond – probably the pond, Lupin realised, where the girl Carne had mentioned had died. He pulled his gaze away hurriedly.

‘You don’t want to be going up there,’ Carne said again.

‘Nevertheless,’ Lupin said lightly, ‘I still have to go to the house. Ghosts don’t tend to show in daylight anyway.’

His eyes were suddenly drawn to a man standing by the road. The old-fashioned suit – jacket, trousers and waistcoat all in dusty black with an unusually high-collared shirt - seemed out of place and out of time compared to the modern dress of all the other villagers, if curiously perfect in that little village. While the other muggles wore what all muggles did, from jumpers and jeans to tracksuits and trainers, he alone matched the age of the buildings. The man watched Lupin with sharp eyes that lurked under what used to be called devil’s eyebrows, upswept and iron grey, and his mouth was a smirk under a neat beard. Lupin had the absurd thought that he was the only one who could see the man, that the fellow was some sort of spectre from the past.

Carne raised his hand to the man, who nodded in return dispelling Lupin’s fanciful notion.

‘I can’t talk you out of it?’ Carne asked gruffly, slowing at a junction.

‘Afraid not.’

‘Hmm.’ Carne turned the car up the hill. ‘You be careful, Mr. Lupin. She don’t only walk in darkness.’

No amount of persuasion could make Carne take him any further than the bottom of the hill. The sea mists had rolled in and as Lupin got out of the car, pulling his case with him, he found he could only see a few feet in front of him.

‘Y’just follow the drive,’ Carne told him, ‘keep an eye on y’feet. There’re posts marking your way.’

Before Lupin could protest Carne backed the car up, turned it and vanished off down the road in seconds. The sound of its engine, too, was quickly swallowed up, leaving Lupin alone in the shifting not-quite-silence of the mists. He shivered, peering out into the stifling white fog but saw only passing shadows that were probably half-imagined anyway. Turning up the collar of his coat he began the walk up the drive.

It was odd to be surrounded by so much silence. Several times Lupin was convinced he had heard some voice - only for it to fade into nothing when he tried to locate it. Once or twice he almost lost the path, stumbling on the neglected drive. It had been gravel but erosion had carved it into channels and trenches that caught his feet. The stones themselves had gathered into humps, which ground and shifted beneath his soles as he stepped on them. Dark posts emerged at irregular intervals; eerie sentinels guarding a blind path. Lupin was all too aware that his destination stood at the top of a cliff; any wrong step could send him plunging into the chilly North Sea.

The path seemed to go on uphill forever, apparently designed to sap the strength of anyone who climbed it. Trees began to loom through the mists, and then a human figure. Lupin leapt back in shock, only to laugh when he realised it was a statue. A marble angel, arms raised to the heavens, stood over him. Others stood behind it in various attitudes of despondency, becoming visible through the thinning mists. Grave markers, all of them, each with its own inscription.

Beneath This Stone Lie The Mortal Remains Of Edgar Wickham. Gaudeamus igitur.

In Loving Memory Of Richard Wickham, And Also His Devoted Wife, Mary May Wickham.

Under These Stones The Tiny Bones Of Samuel Louis Wickham. Little Man, God Took Thy Hand And Took Thee With’im.

Louisa Frances Wickham. Felo De Se. Requiescat in Pace.

A private graveyard, then, in the grounds of the house, which was itself now showing through the clearing mist. Shearwater’s Return was stately and gothic, its cornices and eaves all overgrown with choking plants intent on strangling any life left in the place – if indeed there were any. Lupin stopped before it, studying the building he had come to exorcise. It certainly looked like the kind of place to be haunted.


He decided to check the outside first, taking a stroll round the forbidding walls. The plants were thick and tangled in what had been the back garden, creating a jungle for Lupin to push through. He thought idly how much fun Teddy would have exploring such a place – and then abruptly changed his mind when he discovered that the garden ended at the edge of the cliff, as did the house. There was no boundary: Lupin merely thrust aside a bush to find himself on the edge of a precipice, waves crashing on the rocks far beneath his feet.

He stumbled back quickly, tripping on the overgrown grass in his anxiety to get away from that great yawning cliff. His gaze swept across the house as he tumbled and a chill shot through him as he caught sight of someone watching him from a high window. A white, odd-looking face flashed across his vision and then he was sprawling on damp grass.

Breathless, Lupin pushed back up to his feet and gaped upwards - but the face was gone. He blinked, suddenly unsure whether he had seen it or not. It could have been a flash of light on glass, he supposed, though he remained uneasy. He couldn’t shake the feeling that there had been eyes on him.

Deciding that he had seen quite enough of the garden for the time being, Lupin walked back to the front door. It opened easily, if with a loud creak, into a wide tiled hall. Even for someone who had gone to school in a castle, the faded grandeur of the place was striking. The tiles were in an elaborate black and white pattern repeating across the floor until they met wood-panelled walls. An umbrella stand made from an elephant’s foot stood by the door, two abandoned walking sticks still leaning idly in it. The hunting theme was continued round the walls where glass-eyed trophy heads gazed balefully across the hall. The stags wore cobwebs strung between their antlers while their does were grey with dust. One of the Wickhams had clearly been a keen slaughterer of animals, Lupin surmised, pulling a face.

He found a portrait of the likely suspect in the front parlour: William Walter Wickham standing rather smugly over an unfortunate tiger. The tiger itself appeared to be lying in front of the fireplace and now rather flat. There were paintings hanging on all the walls, eerily still to Lupin’s eyes but apparently watching him all the same.

‘Right,’ he said, dropping his case onto a worn-looking desk, ‘how does one go about flushing out a ghost?’

His words died into silence with no one to answer him. William Walter Wickham continued to give him a superior stare, which was of little help.

‘I don’t think I’ll be following your example.’ Lupin imagined himself creeping through the house armed with gun and net like some big game hunter. ‘Hmm, and now I’m talking to myself. That’s a good start. At least Percy’ll be arriving tomorrow.’

He wandered through the rooms on the ground floor, taking a mental inventory as he did. Most of the furniture was draped in dust sheets, many of which he pulled aside if the shapes beneath looked particularly interesting. He found a fair amount of woodworm and an awful lot of dust. A locked bureau tucked in a corner of the long dining room proved to be a trove of papers and he levitated them all through to the parlour for later study.

The whole house had the distinct feel of being abandoned and empty but unease nagged at Lupin as he remembered the face he was sure he had seen from outside. The Ministry report had noted sightings of that sort, the mysterious black-clad woman being seen at a window, while other times she had been spotted in the grounds or on the drive. Once she had been seen, as Carne had described, there came the unexplained death of one of the village children. If that had been her he had seen and not some trick of the light – as he had half-convinced himself it was – then he would have to take quick steps towards exorcising her before another child paid the price.

The first floor was much the same as the ground floor: several dusty rooms filled with old furniture. There was a nursery was at the east end of the house, its window directly over the cliff. Lupin opened it with some difficulty and stuck his head out, getting a blast of cold air with the sharp scent of the sea. A cormorant sped along the coast like a black dart, skimming the sea far below. Waves crashed heavily onto the rocks, turning the grey-green waters white with spray.

Lupin pulled back, tugging the window shut. It stuck slightly, its frame warped by years of neglect. He abandoned it and turned to study the rest of the room. It was hard to imagine any child being happy in it. Everything was dark and grimy, untouched for years, and the toys themselves looked more like horrors. Glass eyes leered at Lupin from all angles. Figurines of musical monkeys, probably popular a century ago, grinned at him over their instruments, their smart velvet waistcoats long faded into shabbiness. A dolls house against one wall seemed to have faces at every window and one caught his eye.

The house itself was a replica of the one Lupin stood in, from the bird-shaped gargoyles perched on the highest cornices to the tiny bootscraper by the front door. What had taken Lupin’s attention was the attic window, behind which was a very white face. The chilling similarity to what he had seen earlier arrested him, drawing his hand towards the catch that fastened the front of the house and moving him to open it.

The doll plunged downwards as the front swung open, jerking to a sudden halt and swinging like a hanged man.

Lupin jumped back in surprise then laughed at himself self-consciously. He bent to examine the dangling toy. A thread had come loose from its collar and caught on a splinter, suspending the doll halfway down the house front. He caught it on his palm, the figure barely two-thirds the length of his hand. It seemed fairly crudely made, its face bare white fabric with tiny jet buttons for eyes. Tangled black yarn formed its hair over which a scrap of old net provided a veil. Its black silk dress had moth holes through the skirt and bodice. He put it carefully back into its attic, laying it on the little bed and shutting the house front again. All in all, he decided while straightening up and glancing around the nursery again, not a place he would ever think of putting Teddy in.

By the time he had investigated all the rooms he could get into – some, such as the attic, were firmly closed even against magic, though he intended to try them again later – he had a fair stack of papers. He took them down to the study to examine with the others he had found, settling himself at the desk by the window.

It was dark by the time he finished. A late flash of the evening sun had sent long shadows across the room but they soon crept away to join the growing dusk. Twilight passed quickly, vanishing into the west and leaving Lupin in only candlelight. It was by that wavering glow that Lupin found the final piece of his studies: the ghost’s death certificate. A faint chill ran through him as he saw the morbid facts in clear black ink.

Louisa Wickham, nee Hegley. Cause of death: self-murder.’ An additional hand-written note read, ‘Body discovered washed up at Lych Cove. Deceased appears to have leapt from nursery window.

Combined with the other documents he had found Lupin managed to delineate the series of events leading to the tragic act. Louisa Wickham, wife of Lieutenant George Wickham, had given birth to a baby boy, Samuel Louis Wickham, one February some one hundred or so years ago to the joy of all. Louisa, though, seemed to have taken ill shortly after the birth, judging by the number of doctor’s bills Lupin had found. Tragedy struck before the boy reached the age of two when he was found floating face-down in the bath. The verdict given was drowning but later letters seemed to imply a more sinister turn.

A missive from Victoria Wickham-Stanley to her brother George accused Louisa of having been ‘looking at the child as if it were responsible for all the evils in the world,’ and further encouraged George to ‘look to his wife and ensure she receives the care and supervision a poor woman like her requires.’ George had been heartbroken, imploring his sister to know that Louisa ‘meant no harm to anyone nor any creature,’ and described how she spent her days ‘sitting in the old rocking chair in the nursery, as if baby Sam still sat on her knee gurgling his joy.’ He agreed, however, to bar her from the nursery, ‘to aid the recovery of her mind from this grief.’ Two nights after that letter was written, Louisa hurled herself from the nursery window, having stolen the key while her husband slept.

Lupin rubbed wearily at his eyes. The story was sad, no doubt about it, but he wasn’t sure if it could be the reason for the unfortunate woman’s murderous afterlife. Maybe it would make better sense tomorrow in daylight and with another pair of eyes. Percy Weasley was a sensible chap who could generally be relied on to take a clear view on things.

Yawning, Lupin stood and picked up his candle. A few hours of sleep would probably do him a world of good and some of the beds upstairs had looked to be still in good shape.

Shadows leapt and danced around him as he made his way up the staircase. The numerous hunting trophies looked half-alive in the flickering candlelight, their eyes gleaming down at him. Lupin could see the nursery door at the end of the corridor and an involuntary shudder ran through him. He imagined the bereaved Louisa stealing through the house, fumbling at the keyhole and finally committing her last act while her dead child’s toys watched her with staring eyes.

A noise made him jump and he swung round towards it, trying to pinpoint the rustling sound. Just a rat, he chastised himself. Stop acting like a muggle.

A small bedroom on the first floor seemed adequate. He pulled the dust sheet from the bed and pushed at the mattress to test its structural soundness. Satisfied, he transfigured the dust sheet into a sleeping bag – having first managed a cleaning spell Molly Weasley would have been proud of - and laid it across the bed. He sat down to toe off his shoes, staring at his socked feet for a moment while deep in thought. He was about to lie down when a notion occurred to him. He dismissed it at first as foolish but it nagged until, rather sheepishly, he stood and leaned down to check that nothing was hiding under the bed, thinking as he did of how he did that to humour Teddy when he was back home.

Finding only a few stray bits of paper lurking beneath the bed, he straightened up with an almost shameful feeling of relief and looked around. The room itself was mostly unremarkable. No curtains hung in the windows but the sky beyond was black, stars blotted out by cloud. A chest of drawers stood beside the door while a battered dressing table was against the wall opposite the bed. The only thing out of place was a grubby porcelain doll, clad in a lace-frilled Victorian dress, which leaned against the clouded mirror like a sentry. Lupin, too tired to investigate, climbed into his sleeping bag and dozed off. Rain started to patter down outside, light irregular taps that faded as Lupin fell asleep.


When he woke again it was still raining but much more heavily, great droplets cascading down from the sky. He climbed from the bed, slipped on his shoes and walked over to look out. Water poured in heavy torrents from the eaves of the house and battered against the window. The trees and bushes in the overgrown grounds shuddered under the force of the downpour, bending under the violent beating. Lupin could see the white shapes of the stone angels among them and imagined the rain running down their graven faces like tears. He shivered, feeling the chill drifting from the window. In the dark it was all too easy to imagine horrors such as strange women in black creeping through the shadows.

He looked away, glancing across the room where the cracked porcelain doll stood on the dresser. It stared in a disconcerting manner, eyes gleaming in the candlelight as if it was watching him. There were too many eyes in the house: the mounted stags, the paintings on the walls, and the toys in the nursery. These eyes, though, brought the hairs up on Lupin’s neck. They were larger than seemed natural, widened still further by painted eyelashes that splayed out like spider’s legs, and had an eerily hypnotic quality that seemed to suck Lupin in.

He pulled his gaze away with difficulty, returning it to the storm-lashed outside. His reflection looked back at him, ghostly and insubstantial, darkness creating shadows under his eyes and hollows in his stubbled cheeks. He raised a hand to rub his eyes, pressing at tired eyelids before opening them again.

The chalk-white face that stared back at him was not his own.

Startled, his heart suddenly pounding against his ribs, he threw his hand up and screwed up his eyes in a childish attempt to escape. The face that had stared back at him had been so horrible: a corpse with black pits for eyes, dead skin stretched over bones. He stumbled back with the shock, curling away and shielding himself uselessly with his arms. The sight had burned itself onto his eyes, a horrific vision of ugly death.

A bump to his thigh startled him anew, causing him to fling his arms out in flailing panic. Bedclothes met his quivering fingers and he opened his eyes to find the empty bedroom just as it had been. He leant both hands on the bed for a few moments, legs still trembling in fear and breath heaving in and out of his chest.

Slowly, unwillingly, he turned. His eyes ran across the fading wallpaper, the doll with its glassy stare, the dusty shelves and, finally, the window. The glass was empty, showing nothing but darkness and rain, thankfully free of any corpse-like face. He collapsed back onto the bed in relief, still keeping his eyes on the window in case a momentary dip in his vigilance allowed the thing to return. He forced his breathing to slow, trying to calm his racing heart. A particularly loud gust of wind rattling the window startled him anew but the continued emptiness of the glass panes reassured him that the spectre had gone.

Given its horrible countenance, Lupin could well imagine that the thing had evil intentions. He thought of the death certificate he had found downstairs with its damning indictment of self-murder and chills ran up his spine. That a woman could be driven to such an act was bad enough but for her agonies to continue beyond the grave and affect so many others was beyond belief.

Screwing his courage to the sticking point and drawing his wand for good measure Lupin rose to his feet and made his nervous way back across the room. He held his breath as he reached the window, expecting at any moment for that horrific face to spring at him again, but let it out again when that failed to happen. Seeing nothing lurking around the edges of the frame he pushed the window open, jerking it past the rust and paint. The rain poured in, slicking his hair to his forehead as he stuck his head out. There was nothing in sight that wasn’t expected and he pulled back with an easier mind.

As he tugged the window firmly shut his gaze fell again on the doll on the dresser. It seemed to glare back – the open window had set the candle flame guttering wildly and shadows now wavered across the porcelain face.

‘I think you had better join your friends in the nursery,’ Lupin said, his voice sounding hoarse and odd in the empty house.

He picked up the doll, its body cold beneath the frills of its dress. Holding the candle in one hand, having tucked his wand back in his pocket, he crept along the corridor, shoes painfully loud on the floorboards. Dark wooden panels framed his path, sucking in the light from the candle and giving little back. Shadows darted into corners like live beings. The nursery door stood half-open at the end of the corridor, only darkness beyond it. Lupin found he was slowing his pace and inwardly chastised himself for the fear he was betraying.

He stopped dead a few feet from the open door when he heard a thud from upstairs. It was out of place in the supposedly empty house and, given the sight he had witnessed earlier, Lupin was not going to let it go uninvestigated despite the dread thudding again in his breast. He turned abruptly, marching back down the corridor towards the source of the noise. It had been from above and that could only mean the attic, which Lupin had utterly failed to access earlier in the day. Halfway up the stairs, pausing by a large vase filled with dried plants and dusty peacock feathers, he looked up.

The attic door, previously an impenetrable barrier of solid wood, stood open. The doorframe caught the gleam from the candle in Lupin’s hand but the darkness that yawned beyond it was far more forbidding than that in the nursery. Fearful questions raced through Lupin’s mind. Had something gone in there? Or, worse still, had something got out?

He bent to place the doll on the floor, its eyes still staring as he laid it on its back. Wand in one hand and candle in the other he straightened up, checking down the stairs to be sure before taking the next step up with a boldness he didn’t really feel. The boldness deserted him in a rush when he saw that the attic door was suddenly closed again.

Blinking in disbelief, his heart in his throat, he raced up the remaining stairs two at a time. The door handle rattled as he tried it but the door was as obstinately shut as before.

Alohamora!’ he murmured, trying it again louder when this failed.

Just as earlier, nothing could induce the door to so much as shudder. He huffed in frustration and started down the stairs again. Perhaps tomorrow he could find an axe or something similar and physically hack the door down. Percy would arrive in the morning and he would probably be of some assistance.

The rain was louder when he reached the first floor and the cold draught made him realise that a window must have come open somewhere. Irritation still overriding him after his failure to pry open the door he thought of little else as he stormed towards the source of the noise. It was in the nursery, one of the tall windows flapping open into the gale. Rain had splashed inside, spattering the floorboards with water and wet leaves. Lupin seized the handle, yanking the window awkwardly shut and fastening it angrily. The whole house seemed designed to antagonise him, sending him place to place and giving no answers. He glanced around without really looking before striding from the room in a temper.

His brain caught up with his eyes a few seconds later and he stopped dead in the corridor. There had been a flash of white in that room: God, it had been that face! In the window again but – he pushed at his thoughts frantically – not outside, instead reflected in the glass. Sweet Merlin, the ghost had been in the nursery with him, looking over his shoulder!


He backed up the few steps he had taken down the corridor, feeling like a coward in the flat eyes of the paintings lining the walls, and stopped just before the doorway. He didn’t dare to turn around, keeping his back to the room. The sound of his own breathing was loud in his ears, unnaturally so, but above it he heard a hiss from behind him that chilled him to the marrow. It resembled a death rattle but contained one word that frightened Lupin more than anything else.


The word was distorted, elongated and painful.

Wolf…’ it repeated eerily.

Lupin stared ahead in horror, not seeing the empty corridor in front of him, just hearing the accusatory word. Whatever was behind him, it knew what he was. Taking a deep breath he turned, thrusting the candle ahead of him into the nursery.

The flame flickered wildly, creating strange jumping figures, but no ghost leapt out at him with a white face and holes for eyes. He looked to where the figure must have been standing to be reflected in the window before. The floor was wet and his heart rate rose as he realised that there were footmarks, still damp and dark on the floorboards. He followed their trail with apprehensive eyes, feeling something like relief as they vanished on meeting the threadbare rug in the middle of the room.

Fear suddenly gripped him again, though, on realising that they led on beyond it towards the bed. The sheets were undisturbed, layered in thick dust. Lupin bent slowly, one hand going to lift the edge of the bedspread, which hung nearly to the floor. Shadows lurked under it. His fingers, faintly shaking, brushed the fabric.


A crash echoed through the house from somewhere downstairs, startling Lupin away from the bed, and was followed immediately by a piercing scream from the same place. Lupin cast one look back at the bed before rushing from the room. He took the stairs two at a time as he leapt down, feet thumping loudly on the bare wood. The door to the library, a room he had investigated previously and found unremarkable, stood open, which was not how he had left it.

With his heart pumping madly he was too fired up for caution, bursting through the door with his wand straight out in front of him. Shadows fluttered wildly around him, cast here and there by the shuddering flame of the candle he held. He could see no one in the room, only the half-empty bookshelves, but his over-stimulated mind showed him all sorts of potential hiding places.

The sheet-covered shape in the corner – which he knew to be a stuffed bear, having examined it earlier – now seemed to conceal all kinds of malevolent beings let alone the bear itself, which Lupin’s imagination was insisting would at any moment come to life and spring at him with ferocious claws outstretched. He tugged its dust sheet aside, feeling that its dead stare was preferable to a thousand imagined horrors behind it.

The library door suddenly slammed shut with an almighty bang, causing Lupin to leap in shock. He ran to it, jiggling the doorknob frantically but unable to make it budge. He grunted in frustration. The whole house seemed to be against him, fighting his every move. As with the attic earlier the door wouldn’t yield even to an Alohamora, remaining stubbornly closed against him.

‘What is going on in this place?’ he snapped in irritation. ‘Let me the hell out of here!’

He kicked at the door, rising panic overcoming his rationality, but it didn’t even rattle. Groaning, he leant forward against the wood but bolted upright when a tapping noise sounded behind him. His eyes stopped on the bear first, half-convinced that he saw it twitch, but then looked beyond to the window. He could see nothing but the reflection of his candle, a golden blur on cold black glass, and thought about extinguishing it but realised that if anything was out there then it must have already seen him.

The floor creaked under his feet as he slowly crept forward, wand held before him in a slightly shaking hand. He hadn’t thought – after Hogwarts and all the supernatural things he had encountered in his life – that he could be scared of a ghost but here he was, tiptoeing towards an apparently empty window in terror of what could be behind it. When he was within reach he squared his shoulders and with a flick of his wand sent the sash flying up.

The candle was instantly snuffed out by the wind, plunging him into complete darkness.

‘Merlin!’ he muttered, wanting to relight it but also to keep his wand free for defence.

Something brushed against his face and he panicked, striking out only for it to wrap around him. Pulling desperately, he fought to free himself until there was a sudden crash and whatever was holding him went limp. He struggled out of its grasp, panting hard, and cast a hurried lumos.

The curtain, pole and all, lay defeated at his feet. He laughed in hysterical relief, kicking it aside and advancing on the open window.

‘Branches,’ he said dumbfoundedly, seeing what had been tapping for his attention.

They waved at him through the opening like beckoning fingers. Following their invitation he peered out. The neglected flowerbed below was only a few feet from the sill, solid and firm-looking, the library thankfully being the other side of the house from the cliff edge. He cast a quick look back but the library door was still closed. Seeing only one way of escape he climbed onto the windowsill and swung one leg over.

The house was a dark looming bulk above him as he dropped onto the flowerbed, the climbing plants waving fronds at him from the walls. There were no flowers around his feet where he had landed, only scrubby weeds and bare earth. He kicked the leaves and stalks aside, struggling against their tendrils in order to reach the grass. It was still raining, if a little less heavily, and his hair was quickly plastered to his head. He pushed it irritably from his eyes, squinting against the wind and ever fearful that he was somehow walking the wrong way and his next step would be over the cliff.

He sighed with relief when there was finally the crunch of gravel under his feet signifying that he had reached the drive at the front of the house. Shielding his eyes with one hand he peered up. Nothing but the dark lines of the building could be seen, which he supposed was a relief. He didn’t know what he had expected to see otherwise: eerie lights from locked rooms or even the ghost herself at every window, each copy of her staring at him accusingly with those black holes for eyes. He thought of Teddy, safe with his grandmother, and the thought warmed him. Once he was finished in this forsaken place he could go home, home to his son and the happiness there.

I’m sorry you lost your boy, he thought at the dead Louisa, but even if I lost Teddy I wouldn’t be … doing all of this.

The front door opened easily to his touch, swinging inward with a loud creak. Silence otherwise prevailed in the house and Lupin winced at the noise closing the door made. He paused to spell himself dry as he was already starting to shiver – just from the cold, he told himself. Stepping fully into the hall he cast Lumos and raised his wand.

Footprints that were not his own gleamed wetly on the floor, fresh on the tiles.

‘Hell …’ Lupin whispered, following their trail with his eyes.

They led towards the stairs, evenly spaced until they stopped abruptly halfway. Lupin took several heaving breaths, searching desperately for more but finding nothing. The trail had simply vanished.

It was too much. Lupin fled to the study. He closed the curtains first, making sure there was not the merest crack between them for anything to see in. The door he pulled shut but didn’t lock, not wanting to be trapped again. He shifted the desk so he could sit with his back against the most solid-seeming wall with both the window and door in his view. Finally he lit all the candles he could find and settled into the chair with wand in hand, determined to wait out the night.

That was where Percy Weasley found him the next morning: slumped in a chair at the desk with papers strewn across the surface. The multitude of candles he had lit had almost all burnt out. Lupin woke to Weasley blowing out the last of them, pinching the wicks with brief hisses.

‘Good morning, Mr. Lupin,’ he said, diplomatically choosing not to mention the man’s unshaven and rumpled state.

‘Is it?’ Lupin rubbed a hand across his eyes, blinking at the daylight filtering through the filthy windows. ‘I suppose it’s better than last night, at any rate.’

‘Was it bad?’ Weasley asked. ‘It doesn’t look like it was particularly restful, sir,’ he added apologetically.

‘Bad doesn’t begin to describe it. And it’s Remus, not sir.’ He stood slowly, brushing dust from his cardigan.

‘You saw the ghost then?’

‘Saw her?’ Lupin shuddered. ‘I don’t think I’ll ever stop seeing her.’

‘I think,’ Weasley said, with the practicality he had learnt from his mother, ‘that it’ll probably look better after breakfast. The pub in the village apparently serves a good one and the fellow with the car is waiting at the bottom of the drive.’


Part Two


Posted by: smoke (islandsmoke)
Posted at: June 17th, 2012 08:41 pm (UTC)

Dear lord! OK, I'll be under the bed. That's me, in the bottom pic, and I'm not coming out! (Fabulous illustrations, too!)

Beautiful job setting the scene - waaay too good in fact!


Going outside for a little sunshine before moving on to the next part.

(Not sure if that was an intentional nod to "Don't Blink!", but it certainly helped notch up the tension.)

Posted by: skitty_kat (skitty_kat)
Posted at: June 18th, 2012 04:32 pm (UTC)
diddly dum

*evil cackle* That's what I like to hear. Maybe I should have specified that everyone should read it alone in the dark.

(I don't think anyone can use stone angels again without inadvertently referencing that. In this case ... totally intentional.)

Posted by: bonfoi (bonfoi)
Posted at: June 18th, 2012 03:14 pm (UTC)

I'm reading this during a late morning thunderstorm, and it's enhancing the spookiness of this piece.

One thing I'm wondering: Why isn't Remus using more magic or at least thinking along those lines? There are explanations for the abrupt end to the wet footsteps, and the Wolf he heard in the dark.

If this is anything like the Daniel Radcliffe movie, it's probably a good thing I didn't go see it. I grew up on all those British shiver-fests of the Seventies, and that gave me enough nightmares with their plausibility.

Posted by: skitty_kat (skitty_kat)
Posted at: June 18th, 2012 04:30 pm (UTC)
back in the closet

*g* Because it's no fun if he can just wave a wand and it's all sorted out. (Explanations? Well, maybe ... you'll have to wait until part two, which I'll post shortly, promise)

I'm awful with horror films and I spent a lot of Woman in Black hiding, I have to admit. I usually avoid horror films, but Hammer...

Posted by: bonfoi (bonfoi)
Posted at: June 18th, 2012 05:14 pm (UTC)

*chuckling* Yes, Hammer films were something different. Well, then, I'll wait for the second part. In the light.

Posted by: bk7brokemybrain (bk7brokemybrain)
Posted at: June 20th, 2012 05:34 am (UTC)
At Last by Veridian Dair

JFC, woman! It's one thirty in the morning, and I"m getting goosebumps reading your fic, and seeing your terrific illustrations. I might have wet myself when I paged down and that horrid monkey bared its teeth at me. THEN I saw the face in the window. 'Holy shit' is the phrase I've been reaching for, I believe.
I saw The Woman In Black and loved it. I'm loving this just the same. Onward!

Posted by: etain_antrim (etain_antrim)
Posted at: June 24th, 2012 01:34 am (UTC)

I'm reading this in a rare moment off, but I'm not sure I'll be sleeping tonight. Very scary, and so well written. And the illustrations are spooky all on their own. Now off to part 2.

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